WALT: use story language to start our stories
Once upon a time, in a deep dark wood, in a teeny tiny cottage with a straw roof, lived a big rat. His name was Pepper-tree.
He look weird and he had a hat. He had a t-shirt and he had some weird big eyes.
WOW cool story i think you could grow up to be a famous writer
ReplyDeleteyou should do some more writing Aydon.
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